Thursday, April 4, 2013

Finished Short Story

My short story for my intro to fiction class is finally finished. For the rest of the semester I will be revising this story. Until then, here it is the way I turned it in.


Her Settled Division  
            I once dreamt about living in a modern style loft above a coffee shop with the city at my fingertips. How silly of me to actually think Donavan would ever share that same dream. When his parents died, I really thought we’d try our luck in the big city, or at least Louisville. Instead, we moved into his parents run down home just down the street from the store. I didn’t want to sound insensitive at the time, but never in my wildest dreams did I think we’d still be here after 40 years. The devilish red brick is starting to chip away, but it does have some character, I’ll give it that. The dark green shutters and white washed front porch are my favorite things about it. I love to sit on the bench swing during summer evenings, watching the neighbor children play. That squeak it makes is barely audible, but its rhythm is comforting.
            I’d like to, but, I can’t blame Don for my unhappiness. I have only myself to thank for that. I suppose I shouldn’t say unhappiness, because I have lived a happy life; a comfortable one. Don is a comfortable man. He has always provided more than enough for our family. The little food and beverage mart on the corner of Moberly Avenue and Kettle Street is his pride and joy. The place belonged to his father at one time, but it was Don who made it what it is today. He spends the majority of his time there; organizing displays, training employees, and ordering new products. Brownsboro would be an even lonelier place if not for Druthers’. Even folks from Crestwood drive an extra fifteen minutes just to buy groceries there. Just the other day at Bible study, when I was talking to Eloise, and she asked me why I’d been looking so down. She made a joke saying that my wrinkles were multiplying due to my continuous frown. I knew she was right. We walked down the street from the church to Rosie’s, the best coffee shop in town. “I was straightening up the mess in the basement when I came across a list,” I said.
            “A list of what Marlene? Why in the world would a list of anything have you so depressed?” said Eloise.
            “It was a list of things I want to do before I die.”
            “So, a bucket list?”
            “Yeah, but it just got me thinking about what I wanted to see and do in my life. Don’t you have a bucket list?”
            “Yes, I suppose I do have one, but I’ve long since forgotten about it. There’s nothing on it I would do now with Rodger gone.”
            “What is on your list?”
            “Oh, I don’t know I haven’t looked at in forever. I probably threw it out years ago. What’s on yours?”
            “I wanted to see the country. Everything on my list is a natural landmark, like the Grand Canyon and the Rocky Mountains.”
            “So why don’t you go see those places?”
            “You know why Eloise.”
***
                        Fried chicken with mashed potatoes is Donavan’s favorite meal. I make it every Sunday after church. This Sunday was no different, just the two of us ripping chicken from the bone pausing often to readjust teeth that never stay in place. I don’t know why I just don’t cut it off the bone, sure would make eating it easier, but Donovan likes it that way. I was taking a sip of my iced tea when the phone rings. I put down my glass and stood up to answer it. “Who do we know that would call us in the middle of dinner?” I said out loud and walked into the study to find out. Donavan, in the middle of chewing, nodded his head in agreement. “Hello?”
            “Hey Mom!”
            “Ken! I’m so glad you called, how are you sweetheart?”
            “Good Mom, I’m really good. How are you? How’s Dad?”
            “We’re both doing just fine, we miss you though. Please tell me you’re going to come home from Colorado and see us?”
            “Actually, I called to ask you and Dad to come here.” I could feel my pupils expanding, Kenneth has never asked us to visit him. Not once. He and Don went through a rough patch while he was away getting his degree in American History. Ken wanted to see America for himself, not just look at pictures in a textbook. There was no way I was going to stop him, so Don stepped in and made his opinion clear. I knew I had paused too long. “I know Dad probably won’t go for it, but I would really like both of you to think about it.”
            “Well, of course honey but is something wrong? Are you sick? Hurt? Why do you want us to come see you?”
            “No Mom, nothing like that. Do you remember Denise? The girl I was with in the picture I sent you from Niagara Falls?”
            “Yes, it’s still on the refrigerator, did I tell you how beautiful I think she is?”
            “Yeah you already did. I think so too. I asked her to marry me last night, and she said yes!”
            “Oh Ken! That’s absolutely wonderful! Let me tell your father!” I held the telephone receiver to my chest and went as far as the cord would allow to holler around the corner, “Don! Come here and talk to your son! He asked Denise to marry him!”
***
            That night was a long one. After a heated argument between Don and me, I ended up clearing the dinner plates alone, and he stormed out for a walk. I had confessed to him how badly I wanted to visit my son and future daughter in-law, and maybe we could see the sights as long as we were there. He was excited and happy for Ken. He congratulated him, of course, and told him how proud he was of him and the man he had become, but I’m not sure how much of it he actually meant. His voice sounded happy but tight lines around his eyes and the sagging skin at the corners of his cheeks told otherwise. This wasn’t the first time he argued with me about leaving our tiny town. The first time I noticed his inability to leave home was the day after we were married. I had let him make our honeymoon arrangements in hopes that he would want to get away from our families. Instead, he surprised me by taking me to the other side of town and pulled into a gravel drive way.
            The house was completely white and looked as if there wasn’t a stain on it. The landscaping was simply gorgeous. Don had planted as many yellow and orange tulips that would fit in every flower box beneath the windows.  It was the house of our dreams, but our honeymoon was spent moving in and making renovation plans.
            Our marriage was seemingly just as perfect and stainless, but it’s impossible to keep white houses white forever. The lawn mower threw shared grass deposits against it and over time our little dream house grew stained and much less than perfect.  Our marriage resembled the house, with its stains and carelessness. I was bored with our life and didn’t have the heart to tell my husband.  
            The problem was that he never wanted to leave. He would make excuses like, “there’s too much going on at the store,” or “you look like your catching cold dear, probably not a good idea to travel now.”  I wanted, no, I needed to get away.
            Kenneth was 10 years old. I had planned a trip to Washington D.C. because he had taken a special interest in the history of America, and I thought he would enjoy seeing our country’s capital. I had everything ready to go: the flight booked, the hotel reservation, and the tour times. The night before we were supposed to leave Don shook my shoulder to wake me and told me he wasn’t going to go.  “Why not Don? What’s going on?”
            “I just don’t think it’s a good idea alright.”
            “Ken is really looking forward to this. I can’t tell him we aren’t going anymore.”
            “Then you take him alone. I can’t go with you.”
            “Tell me why Don. I just want to know why. Why can’t you just come with us? You’re being ridiculous!” Hot air escaped from his lungs when he sat up in bed. I sat up with him and put my palm against his back, it was drenched with sweat. He was rubbing the tips of his fingers in little circles against his temples, his eyes were squeezed shut and a few tears escaped. I’d never seem him so distraught. Fighting the urge to shake the life out of the thing inhabiting my strong husband was overwhelming. Fighting tears myself, I listened as he proceeded to explain his fear of traveling, of leaving home. The things he was saying didn’t make any sense to me. He was just rambling on about crowds, noises, and stress. Nothing he was saying made any sense.
            It wasn’t until later that he was diagnosed with agoraphobia, which is a panic disorder. For some reason, his brain cannot reason with him and allow him to leave the “safe zone” also known as Brownsboro, our small little town. I didn’t have the heart to take Ken and leave my troubled husband alone.
            Eventually, I came to terms with his fear and got over it. We went about our lives doing what we’ve always done. Don works at the store, I clean house, and we go to church. We participate in community barbeques and picnics at the park. That’s pretty much the extent of it. I want to share an experience with him that we can both look back on and remember joyfully.
            I hadn’t spoken to Don about going to Colorado for an entire week. I think he thought I would just forget about it and move on, but of course I couldn’t. I spoke to Ken daily, discussing tactics that could get Don on that plane. None of which we would ever really go through with. Sedating him and making him go against his will is not an option. Ken finally convinced me just to go alone. He didn’t have to try very hard because that thought had already been playing out in my head. “I’m going to do it Ken. I’ll buy my ticket today.”
            “That sounds good Mom. Let me know what time your plane lands and I’ll pick you up from the airport.” I decided not to tell Don about it. I just left him a note on the counter telling him about my decision. I could deal with the consequences later.
            The taxi cab picked me up at Rosie’s that Friday afternoon. Eloise had offered to drive me but Lord knows she can’t see worth a darn. The cab cost a fortune but I didn’t care. I had never been on a plane before, so it took me some time to navigate through the airport. I was surprised at the number of people coming and going. All of them from different cultures, backgrounds, and races. There was one young lady I thought to be particularly interesting. She had black fishnet tights and a short blood red mini skirt. Her blouse clung to her body for dear life and half of her head was shaved. She must have noticed that I was staring at her because she looked back at me. She raised an eyebrow and stormed down the hallway towards the restrooms.
            I checked my bag in and made it through security with no troubles. I found my loading gate and took a seat. I had some time before we were actually boarding so I bought a book from the book store and began reading it peacefully.
            I got two chapters in when I heard a voice behind me. “Marlene?” I turned around and there was Don, holding my note in his clenched hand. “I got your note.” I didn’t know what to say. I knew I had made a mistake. “Don…” I said lost for words.
            “No, it’s OK Marlene. I know why you’re here. I’m not angry.” He took the seat next to me.
            “I shouldn’t have left like that.” He nodded his head and put his strong hand on my thigh. We sat there in silence for a while. Don just focused on the tile beneath his loafers and swayed back and forth. Tiny beads of sweat still clung to his forehead. He drove to Louisville. That’s something, I thought to myself.  “I still want to go you know,” I whispered in his ear.
            “Yeah… I know.” The attendant at the gate called for the Louisville to Denver flight. I continued to sit there with Donavan. He squeezed my leg and used it to push himself up. I looked up at him hoping that somehow he would decide to come with me. I longed for him to share my desire to leave our home, just for a little while, and be there for our son. He had to have already bought a ticket to get this far into the airport, right? Would he have done that just to bring me back home? He extended his hand to help me stand. I took it and he kissed my forehead tenderly. “Let’s go Marlene.” He held my hand tightly with his twitching fingers and sweaty palms. Together we walked toward the gate.
           
            

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