Monday, February 25, 2013

Revised Whitetail Story...

Trust me this version is MUCH better...


The Wise Whitetail of Northwest Indiana
            I knew the rustling leaves off in the distance would catch the man’s attention.  I watched as he reached for his weapon of choice. Hanging from a cut branch, high in the tree, the bearded face grasped his bow. His bum knee and lack of coordination created an alarming popping noise, but I didn't run just yet. There it was again, the sound he’d heard before. It was closer now, a steady stream of steps coming this way. Then she appeared, broad side and beautiful, a lovely doe. Her broad white chest stuck out when she sniffed the air. I knew what he is thinking. What a delicious slab of meat for my table. I cannot bear to watch this any longer. Is there nothing I can do? I ducked my heavy head under the thick brush I had concealed myself in and took a somber walk back across the gravel road and into the sanctuary.
            I gathered my herd, minus one, under an abandoned lean to, out of the wind, so I could report what I saw. “Listen closely everyone.” They knew what was coming. This wasn't the first time I’d had to report a loss. “Jade is no longer with us… She was killed today by the bearded man.” The usual hush fell over the group as I continued on, “Now I know it is that time of year, when we need to move around often, and eat more to stay warm, but it’s dangerous over there. We all know it!”
            “I agree with you Split,” it was York’s mother, the doe that had been killed, “I don’t want to cross the road ever again.”
            “And you shouldn't have to,” I replied. “I’m sure York is not the only one, let’s take a vote. All who agree gather near the fallen Oak. All who are opposed…”
            “Not so fast Split!” My father had risen from his bed and was limping towards us. His gray head and sagging back show his old age, but the amount knowledge he has stored in his antlers is massive. His very presence makes a strong coyote stop in his tracks. “This is an observed accusation! If we do not cross the gravel road then we will overpopulate and run out of room in the one place we are safe! The sanctuary will no longer be a place of escape! We will run out of food sources and the stream will run dry!” I couldn't help but lower my head at his scolding. 
            “Forgive me Father,” my voice was shaking now, “I just cannot stand to watch another one of us lose our lives by the speeding arrow of the bearded man.”
            “We have been crossing that road from the beginning of time. The truth is this. We all have a destined time and place to die. We cannot change that.”
             My wise old father was killed that fall and mounted proudly on the bearded man’s wall. In my anger I ignored what my father had said. I pushed the decision on my herd, to never cross that road again. And just as my father had said, we overpopulated; our food source was plucked clean, and the stream dried up. Many of us were struck down by powerful driving machines, the newborns starved, and the elderly withered away into dust. I knew that I had been wrong. I gathered those who were strong enough and together we crossed the gravel road.

Theme: My overall message behind this story is to listen and respect those who are older and wiser then ourselves.

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