Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Raccoons That Killed the Church

Alrighy... this is my third flash fiction story. Again, it had to model a story that we had already read for class. It's meant to be kind of goofy and weird. The main focus was suppose to be on the setting. So I'm hoping that the descriptions I use help to create a mental picture of the setting I'm trying to portray.  Hope you enjoy it and maybe laugh a little. :)



Raccoons That Killed the Church
            The perfect pews in their straight lines and narrow paths are the problem. Or maybe it is the lifeless creatures inhabiting them that are the problem. No, most will say that it is the raccoons. The raccoons are the problem.
            Their ringed tails litter what’s left of the floor space and their black noses knock over the decorative flowers in the golden vases. They hang from the rafters and sing along during worship but can’t keep to themselves during the sermon. They crawl inside the old ladies purses sniffing for gum and flavored lipstick. They burrow in the choir gowns and leave surprises on the preacher’s pulpit. They take the “Amazing” out of “Amazing Grace” chewing holes in the hymnals.
            The children’s laughs only encourage the raccoon’s kits to keep chasing one another around in circles during nursery school. The elders are not so amused. They shout until their blue in the face. “Something must be done!”
            Some may say that it’s a sin to hurt one of God’s own creations inside his house of worship but others disagree. Pastor Davis took matters into his own hands after the service on a Sunday afternoon. He set traps in every room in every corner. He tricked them with peanut butter and cheese. One by one the traps sprung and great metal jaws pinched the life away from the raccoon's. The place reeked of death and blood but the job was done.
            Davis brought the bodies out back and stacked them high. The orange glow shone bright through the surrounding trees alerting the rest of the town that the dead had been done.
            The north west wind shifted just in the slightest. The flickering flames tickled the side of the church. The rustic old building was not prepared and the cider siding caught the heat. Before Davis knew it the whole building was on ablaze. No one could get there in time. The minuscule Church of the Nazarene lay vanquished in a smoldering heap between Marty’s Corner Store and Old Fishers Farmers Mart. The raccoons, as they say, killed the church.
            



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